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document.write("- 520740发表于:2017-10-25 16:23:14
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document.write("- 深海发表于:2017-10-19 7:22:47
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document.write("- 我觉着最后第三句可以把“深爱”改成“疼着”,把最后一句的“爱”改成“美好”或者“好曰子”,这样好象更贴近现实。我不会写诗,仅供参考!");
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