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document.write("- 雁声凌云发表于：2017-3-25 16:46:42
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document.write("- 制怒王子发表于：2017-3-25 15:01:34
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document.write("- 写得很美！诗句清新自然，情感真挚，诗意和诗境齐备。");
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